I think that the asteroids should be at the side, it's a little bit in the way of the focal point. As for the second planet, the one that looks like the closest one on the left, I think the piece would look better with out it. Try and make the star a little spiker.
The planet on the right looks extraordinary, loving the texture. The composition is a bit overwhelming though, 4 planets (and very large ones at that!) + asteroids. Hard to detect any main focus. Other than that a well made piece indeed
Zajebistą głębie zbudowałeś dzięki tym rozmazanym asteroidą dziwnie zrobiłeś światło od tej dużej gwiazdy btw. nad nią jest taka fioletowa gwiazdka, która nie powinna dawać światła na asteroide a daje mogłeś też dać nieco niebieskiego światła na te asteroidki Poza tym to jest bardzo dobrze, choć ostatnio robiłeś znacznie lepsze od tego zdaje mi się, że to w formie eksperymentu
Hmm... My one criticism is the blur on the foreground asteroids. It looks like they're out of focus in the foreground, which makes the eye think that they're very small and close -- perhaps pebbles floating near the camera. The image would probably work better without the blur...
The planet textures are excellent, however -- particularly on the one on the right.
I didn't like foreground asteroids when they were not blured, they looked like stones and in my opinion they were too disturbing, I thought that blur can help but I see it didn't. Thanks for criticism, it's very important for me. Happy new year!